Men and women are different in terms of their characteristics and abilities. For this reason,
some jobs are better done by men and others by women.
Do you agree or disagree?
These days, it seems that more women entering “male occupations” than ever before and vice versa. While some still hold to a conservative opinion that there are many jobs better carried out by one sex than the other sex, I firmly believe that people of any genders could be capable of doing everything effectively.
First of all, I would argue that it is a mistake to base on social generalizations about characteristics of men and women as such stereotypes are absolutely incorrect. Although there are certain traits that are typical for one gender but not for the opposite gender, it is manifest that not all women are physically weaker and not all men lack patience and soft skills such as interpersonal skills. Therefore, it is acceptable for women to wear safety construction kit or men to be sale representatives. If males and females desire to work in certain fields, it would be miserable to hinder them from proving their ability, they should be given equal opportunities instead.
Another point should be mentioned is that the presence of both genders at a workplace could bring about a higher quality of work. Towards one specific task, men and women are likely to have distinct ways to handle it, possibly resulting in a higher degree of efficiency and creativity. Take accounting career, which used to prioritize females as it requires meticulosity and attentiveness, has witnessed a remarkable increase of male workers by 30% within two last decades, as an example. In fact, a survey concluded that male accountants are more successful than their counterparts in dealing with financial problems.
By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my viewpoint that the position of men and women in one organization should be appreciated equally in lieu of judging their gender’s characteristics.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... their gender's characteristics.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, still, therefore, while, in fact, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15488215488 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14204020452 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.5680264921 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.181818182 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213958104922 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781624343718 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584990932575 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120720153162 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486146868047 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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