Mobile phones enable us to take work or personal calls anywhere, anytime.Do you think has a positive effect on individuals and society?
It is true that nowadays technology is very fast through it is very common in any nations.It can root that some people ponder that employees might personal call in their work place but also it is negative impact us all the employess.The are manifold reasons for this .This essay would throw some light an all the aspects to see things in the right way.
The seeds are issue and multiheads .There most predominant it is no doubt technology has using in any work .For instance, Smart class, Engineer, agricultural,Business ,
university,college and so on. some older think that dozen should do work in their work than they has not take a personal calling and chatting all in all it must influence on their work.Therefore, they has using cell phone for everywhere instead of
they has doing call any time.However, it should bad effect in their professional career.
Nevertheless,there are no denying,in my point of view, adolescent must not use on internet as well as they has doing something work on office. Furthermore,they might easily focus on our work as far as they can consciousness about any work relate to passion and they would do it in their life.Last but not the least,in few days it has very touching competition one to other community.Otherwise,
youngster has a lots of websites.For examples, instagram,Twitter and Snapchat extra.I think that they has plethora time killing in our life.
All said and done,I reckon on one had i say that youth could not take call in the professional work than it is superb impact on their work.On other hand they should easily awareness on any project but they has attend calling for personal any time.Thus,it has not good impact of professional life .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, i reckon, i think, no doubt, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97902097902 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24117391285 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548951048951 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 20.2975951904 232% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.611520917 49.4020404114 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 237.333333333 106.682146367 222% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.6666666667 20.7667163134 230% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 26.0 7.06120827912 368% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 50.0 5.01903807615 996% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178539305097 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937098747321 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638491728333 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.092126748699 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554646601951 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.9 13.0946893788 198% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.23 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.4 11.3001002004 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.8 10.1190380762 206% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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