Modern technology allows machines to perform the hard work instead of humans. Does this have a positive or negative effects on people? Give your own opinions and examples.
From stone ages to space travel, technology has made many advances. As a result , most of the work in factories, companies, organizations etcetera is done by machines rather than workers. this development has both advantages and drawbacks, which will be discussed in following paragraphs followed by a reasonable conclusion.
As far as its positive effects on people, first and the foremost benefit is it save time and efforts. Due to advance machines now we are able to do more productivity in less time and less hard work. Secondly, use of machines such as computer,calculator gives us accurate results in account field. Humans often make mistakes in mathematics and can experience lose. Apart from this, it also increases overall performance and growth. Instead of above benefits it also results in some side effects for people.
When majority of task is done by machines then it escalate dependency of people on machines, which makes then lazy and less concentrated. Moreover some tasks can be better performed by humans instead of machines like stiching, cleaning instead of machines and when done by machines does not give desired outcomes. In addition to this, this development has boost health problems among people for instance obesity,cancer, breathing problems. Doing manual work usually keeps people fit and healthy, however reliance on machines reduce body efforts and enhance health issues.
To conclude, modern equipments for doing work has both positive and negative on people, however its advantages outweigh its disadvantages and this development will continue well in future also.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'however', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'apart from', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'such as', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.278169014085 0.247107183377 113% => OK
Verbs: 0.147887323944 0.155533422707 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.080985915493 0.0946595960268 86% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0915492957746 0.0501214627716 183% => Less adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0316901408451 0.0437548338989 72% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12676056338 0.122226691241 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0528169014085 0.0403226058552 131% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.9549053681 2.80594681477 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0176056338028 0.0326793684256 54% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0457746478873 0.0861772015684 53% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0140845070423 0.021408717616 66% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0140845070423 0.011925033212 118% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1607.0 1933.35771543 83% => OK
No of words: 252.0 316.048096192 80% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 6.37698412698 6.12580529183 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.40873015873 0.374742101984 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.349206349206 0.28420135186 123% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.257936507937 0.203846283523 127% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.138888888889 0.137316102897 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9549053681 2.80594681477 105% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.037074148 90% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626984126984 0.56093040696 112% => OK
Word variations: 68.2208494096 60.7387585426 112% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.7743622355 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5174887392 49.517814964 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.785714286 127.492653851 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7743622355 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.07142857143 0.814263465372 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 3.99599198397 225% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 52.9206349206 49.1944974215 108% => OK
Elegance: 1.68831168831 1.69124875643 100% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344321308828 0.332605444948 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0812544329174 0.102741220458 79% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0784582498456 0.0668466124924 117% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.492248987988 0.534860350844 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.171798603124 0.148594505496 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116197907627 0.134430193775 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529018619462 0.0742795772207 71% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.227917472182 0.324371583561 70% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0569698423832 0.0638462369009 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209324402666 0.228012699653 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572875275858 0.058150111329 99% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 10.4468937876 134% => OK
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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