Modern technology allows machines to perform the hard work instead of humans. Does this have a positive or negative effects on people? Give your own opinions and examples.
From stone ages to space travel, technology has made many advances. As a result, most of the work in factories, companies and organizations is done by machines rather than workers. This development has both advantages and drawbacks, which will be discussed in following paragraphs followed by a reasonable conclusion.
As far to discuss its positive effects on people firstly, its benefit is it to save time and efforts. Due to advance machines now we are able to do more productivity in less time and less hard work. Secondly, use of machines such as computer,calculator gives us accurate results in account field. Humans often make mistakes in mathematics and can experience loss. Apart from this, it also increases overall performance and growth. In contradiction, to above stated benefits it also have some side effects on people.
When majority of task is done by machines then the rate of dependency increases on machines, which makes them lazy and less concentrated. Moreover, some tasks can be better performed by humans instead of machines like stiching, cleaning instead of machines and when done by machines it does not give the desired outcome. In addition to this, development has boost health problems among people for instance, diseases like obesity, cancer, breathing problems etc. Doing manual work usually keeps people fit and healthy. However, relying on machines reduce body efforts and enhances health issues.
To conclude, modern equipment's used for doing work has both positive and negative effects on people. However, its advantages outweigh its disadvantages and this development will continue and will hike in the coming days.
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Suggestion: , calculator
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Message: Did you mean 'has'?
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'apart from', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'such as', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.278523489933 0.247107183377 113% => OK
Verbs: 0.157718120805 0.155533422707 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0738255033557 0.0946595960268 78% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0671140939597 0.0501214627716 134% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0369127516779 0.0437548338989 84% => OK
Prepositions: 0.11744966443 0.122226691241 96% => OK
Participles: 0.0570469798658 0.0403226058552 141% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.91533103796 2.80594681477 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0268456375839 0.0326793684256 82% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0469798657718 0.0861772015684 55% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0167785234899 0.021408717616 78% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0134228187919 0.011925033212 113% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1660.0 1933.35771543 86% => OK
No of words: 262.0 316.048096192 83% => OK
Chars per words: 6.3358778626 6.12580529183 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20517956788 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.400763358779 0.374742101984 107% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.343511450382 0.28420135186 121% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.259541984733 0.203846283523 127% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.137404580153 0.137316102897 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91533103796 2.80594681477 104% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.037074148 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618320610687 0.56093040696 110% => OK
Word variations: 67.2420136081 60.7387585426 111% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 16.375 20.7743622355 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3326041587 49.517814964 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.75 127.492653851 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.375 20.7743622355 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.9375 0.814263465372 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 50.7261450382 49.1944974215 103% => OK
Elegance: 1.73076923077 1.69124875643 102% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365941783296 0.332605444948 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0664178459974 0.102741220458 65% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0789793023136 0.0668466124924 118% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.462527370088 0.534860350844 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.138401583219 0.148594505496 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119281698961 0.134430193775 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641659740754 0.0742795772207 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.219087731429 0.324371583561 68% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0326997399978 0.0638462369009 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223615394581 0.228012699653 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534340564896 0.058150111329 92% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.5751503006 233% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 10.4468937876 144% => OK
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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