Modern technology has made it easier for individuals to download copyrighted music and books from the internet for no charge.
To what extent is this a positive or a negative development?
Thanks to the development of technology nowadays, humans can do a variety of useful an important things without having to travel too far or paying too much costs. Especially, modern technology has allowed people to download and use various kinds of music and book copyrighted from websites on the Internet without any charge. In my point of view, I reckon that it is truly a positive and wonderful development for humans’ life. By that way, technology helps us save a significant amount of time and money as well as protect the environment.
To start with, downloading music and books from Internet websites is really helpful and efficient. This make us be able to enjoy a large storage of knowledge and entertainment and don’t need to move in far distances or splash out too much money for our learning as well as life enjoy. In the past, people have to travel from place to place to find their necessary books or buy a CD of their favorite band, which is time-consuming. Nowadays, all they have to do are staying at home, turning on their technical devices, searching on the Internet, and they can have a wonderful and adequate way for their studying and relaxing. During Covid-19 isolation, I have to study at home and don’t have chances to go out. Thanks to some useful websites and learning groups on the Internet, I have free e-books to practice IELTS as well as English podcasts, movies and music to help me ease my brain in my leisure time.
What’s more, ebooks or music which can be stored both online and offline can contribute to protecting the environment. They has reduced a huge volume of paper and polucarbonate plastic used for manufacturing books and CDs. The process of producing all these items also includes the participation of many chemicals, which are very polluted and do harm for the environment. When we are able to find almost our essential things in our own houses, we won’t have to go outside and use our means of transportation so that we help in reducing the amount of gas exhaust discharge to the environment. Again, in Covid-19 quarantine last year, when all people around the world had to work online and isolate at their home, using the Internet to help them be productive, it was reported that the atmosphere became more green and clear, global temperature also decreased, showing positive changes on the Earth.
To summarize, the modern technology which make copyrighted books and music available for individuals to download and use has proved exceptional aspects of its development thanks to its really useful function and positve impacts on human beings and environment.
All in all, the young people should put their genuine happiness above the unrealistic temptations as they still have a long way to go.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 98, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'thing'?
Suggestion: thing
...can do a variety of useful an important things without having to travel too far or pay...
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Line 1, column 152, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
... having to travel too far or paying too much costs. Especially, modern technology ha...
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Line 1, column 499, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...us save a significant amount of time and money as well as protect the environment...
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Line 2, column 325, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'place to'.
Suggestion: place to
...In the past, people have to travel from place to place to find their necessary books or buy a CD ...
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Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...ute to protecting the environment. They has reduced a huge volume of paper and polu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, still, well, i reckon, as well as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 10.4138276553 278% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 41.998997996 164% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2293.0 1615.20841683 142% => OK
No of words: 469.0 315.596192385 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88912579957 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65364457471 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78734722604 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515991471215 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 720.0 506.74238477 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.0750239126 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.3125 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3125 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6875 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232264940502 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829568993936 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775572379685 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137598331776 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0889642307226 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.