Money always generates mixed feelings in the general public. In some opinion, they claim that happiness majorly comes from money. Nevertheless, it is believed that money does not have any relevance to happiness. In this essay, I would shed light on both sides and justify my perspective.
To some people, they think that happiness could be created by money. For example, in this day and age, when we have a problem or joylessness which makes us feel bad, the solution would be to go shopping. The release of stress and sadness by spending money is becoming more popular when luxurious services such as eating dinner at famous restaurants appear. Besides that, to some people, happiness is wealth because when they have money, life would be easier as they can buy anything and pay for everything. Money is always a problem for adults and parents, they need to earn money and raise a family in such a tough life, where simple demands like education and healthcare are really expensive. Therefore, without money, it would be very difficult to live a comfortable and happy life.
However, some opinions claim that happiness cannot be bought by money. There are rich people who have an enormous amount of money but are not actually happy. They are busy earning money, meeting their partners or flying for contracts so that they do not have enough time for their family. As a result, being far away from home many times makes the distance between family’s member farther. Furthermore, they may get problems about health such as depression because of loneliness, they have no one to share thoughts or gossip with. Money is a required factor nowadays, however, concentrating too much on it is not a good choice. Money can buy everything from houses to cars but it cannot buy family and friends, which are true happiness to us.
In conclusion, I believe that we have multitudes of benefits from money but we should not consider it as an important factor that brings us happiness.
Money always generates mixed feelings in the general public. In some opinion, they claim that happiness majorly comes from money. Nevertheless, it is believed that money does not have any relevance to happiness. In this essay, I would shed light on both sides and justify my perspective.
To some people, they think that happiness could be created by money. For example, in this day and age, when we have a problem or joylessness which makes us feel bad, the solution would be to go shopping. The release of stress and sadness by spending money is becoming more popular when luxurious services such as eating dinner at famous restaurants appear. Besides that, to some people, happiness is wealth because when they have money, life would be easier as they can buy anything and pay for everything. Money is always a problem for adults and parents, they need to earn money and raise a family in such a tough life, where simple demands like education and healthcare are really expensive. Therefore, without money, it would be very difficult to live a comfortable and happy life.
However, some opinions claim that happiness cannot be bought by money. There are rich people who have an enormous amount of money but are not actually happy. They are busy earning money, meeting their partners or flying for contracts so that they do not have enough time for their family. As a result, being far away from home many times makes the distance between family’s member farther. Furthermore, they may get problems about health such as depression because of loneliness, they have no one to share thoughts or gossip with. Money is a required factor nowadays, however, concentrating too much on it is not a good choice. Money can buy everything from houses to cars but it cannot buy family and friends, which are true happiness to us.
In conclusion, I believe that we have multitudes of benefits from money but we should not consider it as an important factor that brings us happiness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: public
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rue happiness to us. In conclusion, I believe that we have multitudes of benef...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, really, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87833827893 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54920495032 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581602373887 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2679074543 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3333333333 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7222222222 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77777777778 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.549129729312 0.244688304435 224% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.189832219487 0.084324248473 225% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13488459458 0.0667982634062 202% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.391439275007 0.151304729494 259% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.296275790628 0.056905535591 521% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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