New Constructions are the beginning phase of development. Huge amount of money should be allocated for renovation; however, I strongly believe that money should be spent to construct new public facilities.
Contemporary buildings are essential to develop majority of spheres, such as medicine, education, sport and others. If new constructions are comfortable, equipped with all types of technologies, as well, they may lure people to study or get medical services. Obviously, some types of new facilities are constructed for leisure activities, such as gym, which can be vital not only to be physically fit, but also to prolong individual’s life.
Poverty rate increasing over the last years, which can lead to descend homeless rate. Apparently, conventional houses are sold highly cost as they need to be built on wide range of land. Therefore, government should allocate much money to construct skyscraper houses instead of luxury traditional ones. If poor people owned this types of houses as a debt, they can pay home’s cost in a limited period.
Although contemporary buildings bring much benefit to society, historical constructions can attract tourists. Evidently, historical buildings make cities differentiate between each other as a result majority of tourists tend to visit this types of valuable constructions. Flows of tourists are profitable to country’s budget; therefore, officials should spend much money to reconstruct historical constructions per year.
To summarize, historical buildings are essential to lure tourists to increase country’s budget, yet, new public facilities and constructions are beneficial to develop some spheres, reduce homeless rate, as well.
- Money should be spent on creating new public buildings, such as museums and town halls, rather than renovating existing ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree 11
- Money should be spent on creating new public buildings, such as museums and town halls, rather than renovating existing ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tructions are beneficial to develop some spheres, reduce homeless rate, as well. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.79051383399 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30419652811 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604743083004 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6043636765 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.692307692 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137886164692 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515102092009 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633698433065 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0883483165614 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713325799529 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.3 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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