More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone.
In the contemporary life, moving to metropolis in order to have a better life is increasingly becoming prevalent tendency. However, life in urban areas is likely to be challenging. This essay will discuss some reasons related to this problem and put forward to some steps that governments can take to tackle this issue.
To begin with, there are a number of reasons why the life in mega city seems to be taxing. Firstly, urban citizens may confront with higher cost of living than rural areas and outskirts. this can explained by the fact that population of metropolis are likely to be teeming. As a result, the demands of human needs tend to higher than other areas. Therefore, urban living expenses would be more exorbitant.
secondly, urban dwellers are prone to encounter many health problems. The enormous number of vehicles in city center usually emit exhaust fumes which can make residents easy to get some respiratory diseases. For example, the research of Mr.A in University of Houston has given indication that 60% of people living in metropolis were susceptible to lung-related diseases, especially lung cancer.
There are some steps that governments should take to tackle this issue. Firstly, many new social housing should be built in order to meet the demands of lower class family in city center. In other words, these houses would be sold with reasonable prices that low-income people can afford. Secondly, to reduce gases emissions released into atmosphere in metropolis, governments should spur urban inhabitants to use public transport such as buses or trains in city center.
In conclusion, there are various issues that metropolitans could suffer and authorities should take some steps to address these issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22142857143 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68977656306 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582142857143 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0832444917 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.375 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327551669137 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934039516031 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590475547381 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151863997931 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0756993361214 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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