In this new era, readymade food is becoming increasingly popular among young people. There could be several benefits and drawbacks. Although overconsumption of processed food can lead to certain health diseases, eating readymade meals are very convenient. In my opinion, homemade meals are far more beneficial rather than readymade dishes.
The greatest advantage of processed food is that it is very convenient. Pre-cooked meals are easy to carry everywhere as it comes in good airtight packaging. For instance, noodles, pasta, soups. People prefer to carry this food when they are traveling. In addition, readymade food is time-saving. It just needs to boil of heat. College students and office workers prefer this because it takes short time to prepare. Many people prefer it because it is not time-consuming and brings
On the other hand, eating this food is not always advantageous. Overconsumption of outside meals can negatively affect one’s health. This food contains a high amount of preservatives which can lead to gastrointestinal disorders. For example, medical research has shown that consumption of processed food can invites intestinal ulcers and bowel diseases. Moreover, it contains a high amount of fat and carbohydrates than nutrients. Which has a negative impact on health. As a result of that, people suffer from certain diseases such as obesity, digestive disorders
In conclusion, These days readymade meals become incredibly common. Processed meals can be time-saving and convenient for individuals; however, it is unhealthy and can lead to health issues. In my view, readymade meals have both merits and demerits but the drawback of being unhealthy outweighs all benefits.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53816793893 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05131844574 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587786259542 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5997267749 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.55 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251845252175 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708842093173 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593738543378 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143811324836 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654138365653 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.96 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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