Crime is a serious and growing problem in most societies. Certain part of the society believes that, by giving longer sentences to criminals will reduce the rate of crime. While the rests believe in alternative ways for reduction of crime. In this essay, I will discuss both the sides and present my opinion.
Firstly, if a criminal have to spend more time in the jail, they would become more aware of consequences before committing a crime. Also, doing more time in prison will provide a good opportunity to rethink his or her life choices. For example, a criminal who committed crime like a murder will require more time to rehabilitate and mix again with the society.
On the other hand there are some people believe in alternative ways for punishment. One of them is doing community services. A criminal would be helpful to society by doing community services rather than being locked up. In addition, it will provide a good way to preserve his or her mental and physical health and save some government resources.
In conclusion, both the sides provide good arguments but I believe in alternative ways. The jurisdictional system should explore more alternative methods for reduction of crime.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1000.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 201.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97512437811 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72486067922 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597014925373 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.2240321957 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.9230769231 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4615384615 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286104498434 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103065937548 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0935759721634 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173669552196 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116626704854 0.056905535591 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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