more and more people are relocating to cities, but city life can be very challenging. Describe some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments improve urban life for everyone
These days, more and more people who living in countrisides move to cities, but living in city can be very difficult. For example, more people move to cities will cause cost of living and health problems. In my opinion, goverments should do much more to improve city life for everyone.
The first problem for anyone who hope to migrate to a large city is the cost of living is higher than small town. urban dwellers have to pay higher price for housing, transport, food...The price increase may be due to shipping costs. Because cities are always far from the source of production, transportation costs are needed. To fix the problem, goverments should to invest money in the building of social housing to reduce the cost of living. build more public transportation to reduce travel costs for citizen.
The second problem is health problems. Inhabitants of city can be faced with health problem. They have to suffer harsh competition everyday to secruse a place in the labor market and always have to adapt to the city's rapid changes. It lead to them easy to fall into depression. Furthermore, air pollution, lack of green areas and sedentary lifestyle in the city are also cause of health problems. city residents are more susceptible topsychological and respiratory diseases than in other areas. To change thus solution, the goverment should moving industry and jobs to provicial towns and rural areas to minimize competition and people coming to city looking for the jobs.
In conclosion, various ways goverments could be taken in order to solve cost of living and health problems, which are the two main problems facing urban life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Urban
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Suggestion: Build
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Suggestion: leads
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Suggestion:
...two main problems facing urban life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, may, second, so, thus, well, as to, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02554744526 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65714736051 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56204379562 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8375949784 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0625 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.125 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377479041959 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125367850553 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104949043731 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236800789593 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.147502662501 0.056905535591 259% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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