More and more people are using computer and electric device to access information. Therefore, there is no need for printed books, magazine and newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
The precedence of technology in the modern world which was a hotly debatable topic has now become more controversial. While copious folks claim that the world has become a global village owing to Information technology and all knowledge available in digital formats In my, opinion I firmly believe that there is still a need for physical and printed books despite eminent computerization. this essay further elaborates my views in the upcoming paragraphs and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
to begin with, the first statement there is no denying the fact that advanced automation has replaced the need of getting knowledge through printed books and magazines Moreover, In the current age the info is just one click away numerous folks prefer to access data through various websites through laptops and smartphones. for instance, Nowadays students prefer to learn from e-books available in the form of PDF format that is stored on their personal mobile and they can be read while traveling.
On the other hand, I disagree with the statement there is no conviction that youth and Adult people gravitate towards automation and get data and information from a range of resources. However, it is not an easy task for the old generation of the planet. Furthermore, the role of physical interaction can not be faded. For example, some students are addicted to learning and making notes using underlining the keywords of physical records which can not be possible in E-books. furthermore, the old generations are not able to be less prone to mechanization or computers therefore, they are unable to access the information.
Finally, to sum up, according to the aforementioned arguments reach a conclusion that undoubtedly technology has emerged as an essential part of our life and we are heavily reliant on a routine basis however in my personal point of view physical interaction with books and magazine is crucial and printed formats should be available in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16199376947 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91040435486 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582554517134 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.3625056466 49.4020404114 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.636363636 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1818181818 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.2727272727 7.06120827912 202% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17862911418 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055511440506 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349899163833 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0936515719392 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245103065712 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.24 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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