more and more people are using the internet to do that task rather than doing it in-person does the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
There is no denying the fact that the phenomenon of using the internet is ubiquitous due to its importance. One school of thought opines that it is worth it. however, others consider that a couple of problems also occurred because of the same. The use of the internet has a plethora of merits. Yet numerous demerits are also there. which will be discussed in upcoming paragraphs.
Initiating with the best possible benefits and most significant advantage, First and foremost, People can save their lots of time by doing their work on internet while just sitting at home. This is because of the speed of the internet nowadays people have. To exemplify, A number of applications are available on the internet for payment of the light bill, gas bill, mobile recharge, etc. The public can pay their bills with just the tip of their fingers within a minute. Secondly, In the past time student had to submit their homework and assignments to the class teacher by going physical to the school. Consequently, By use of the internet student can submit their work online on the website by sitting at home. In short, Looking at the above points it can be concluded that the use of the internet is a time-saving tool for people in this day and age.
On the paradoxical side, There are many drawbacks as well. First of all, Society is becoming lazy day by day by using the internet in recent time. Elaborating this, Before the internet people went shopping for their needed things. but now they do not go shopping they just order it online. For example, Amazon is providing home delivery so no need to go to a shop in stores. Because of this, Sometimes people can not get their desired things as they want to buy. Apart from this, People meet their relatives online instead of meeting personally as a result relationship is not much stronger as compared to the past. In fact, the internet makes society lazy and weaker their relationship.
To conclude without any doubt this is a mixed bag. If using the internet for tasks has many positives, then the negative points of this issue may not be underestimated. after looking at both arguments, from my perspective, the pros outrival the cause of this discussion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, apart from, for example, in fact, in short, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1824.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76240208877 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60913251547 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532637075718 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5998439344 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9583333333 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188284845969 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543735290042 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484282773937 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11373875884 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277051336411 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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