Some people think sports games are important for society while others believe they should be taken as leisure activities Discuss both views and give your opinion

Sports and games are very debatable topics nowadays in the current stage of life. some individuals believe that sports and games are essential for the community and other things that it is considered as leisure activities. this essay will discuss both sides of the argument about sports and games in depth.

There are a number of people who have believed that sports and games are necessary things in developing our society games and sports make a person a physically active person. For example, today's kids are taking more interest in the outside Door games and other sports activity live cricket and football, so these things make the child health batter.

On the other hand, many people believe that sports and games are only part of leisure activities nowadays people have lots of workload on them. So they have not enough time for sports and games for example in our society. People are working 66 days a week. They have only one day for other activities because of this busy schedule of people they have not enough time for sports and games. So they are considered sports and games are not important and it's a leisure activity to do.

In conclusion Are sports and games essential for society? A number of people think that sports and games are important and necessary things for society others believe that it can only consider is a leisure activity. This essay discussed the various reasons. Why people held this point of view and whether sports and games are useful for only part of leisure activity.

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Average: 7.1 (8 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1260.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84615384615 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24874718573 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.446153846154 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5391735381 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78571428571 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.44137431967 0.244688304435 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.181742279295 0.084324248473 216% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822076456641 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.292667678787 0.151304729494 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554367853015 0.056905535591 97% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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