More and more people today are buying and driving cars, which has a positive impact on the economy but can hurt the environment. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
It is widely observed that cars are becoming increasingly popular with citizens in present-day society. While I acknowledge the economic benefits of this development, I believe they pale in comparison with its detrimental effects on the environment.
Granted, the automobile industry has made great contributions to the economy in many ways. Given the fact that only a handful of well-developed countries have companies that are financially and technologically capable of producing cars, a large proportion of these cars are exported to less developed countries, bringing about tremendous benefits for the former countries’ national economy. For example, the US, Germany and Japan are all major economies whose success can be largely attributed to their car exports. It is also important to note that this industry has created an incredibly wide range of job opportunities, thus providing finance for millions of people.
However, I would argue that these economic benefits are outweighed by the harm cars cause to the environment. Considering that car production requires gigantic amounts of fossil fuels, it comes as no surprise that this industry is currently one of the key drivers behind the accelerating depletion of these renewable resources. In addition, cars release significant volumes of exhaust fumes, which greatly exacerbates various environmental problems, namely air pollution and climate change. This can be seen in the case of the US, where carbon dioxide and greenhouse gases emitted from cars account for a massive one-fifth of the country’s total global warming pollution.
In summary, while it is true that the automobile industry can offer various financial benefits for both individuals and countries, these benefits are nullified by the damage it does to the environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, in summary, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58909090909 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10328218675 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.4284545194 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.727272727 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63636363636 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118199935721 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046033814002 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0217085774787 0.0667982634062 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.06422576807 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343475995217 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.5 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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