Nowadays, purchasing items such as cars or clothes from prestigious brands is increasingly becoming popular among a large number of people. The reasons behind this trend will be indicated in the following essay, in my opinion, it could bring both positive and negative consequences in equal measure.
To begin with, people often have a tendency to judge a person by his or her look before choosing how to treat them in an appropriate way. Therefore, the vogue of using large brand's products mostly stems from people's belief in personal possessions reflecting wealth, social status, and appearance. Besides, the merchandise was manufactured by prevalent brand names such as Nike or Adidas are commonly purchased not only because of their high quality and high fashion items but also used to polish people's appearance more than that of smaller brands. In addition to that, goods like cars produced by luxurious brands are usually sold at exorbitant prices due to their expensive materials and unique features. Hence, these items are often considered a tool for the rich to show off their social status or their wealth.
On the other hand, more and more people purchasing goods from famous brands can bring both merits and drawbacks to the business world. Countries, where trendy brands are originated, are more likely to possess a strong and sustainable economy. For instance, the US - the nursery of hundreds of large brands, for example, Apple and Microsoft, has been the strongest economic superpower since the late 20th century partly since the products of enterprises are ardently welcomed not only in domestic but also in foreign markets. However, the rise of dominant brand names can have a strong impact leading to monopoly as large companies will attempt to dominate and finally wipe out smaller rivals to maintain their positions.
The long and the short of it, I do strongly believe that the famous brand's products selling well demonstrate the progress of society. However, every consumer should according to their practical situations to choose goods, following the trend blindly is inadvisable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 115, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... is increasingly becoming popular among a large number of people. The reasons behind this trend w...
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Line 2, column 116, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an appropriate way" with adverb for "appropriate"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... look before choosing how to treat them in an appropriate way. Therefore, the vogue of using large br...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, hence, however, look, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1769.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21828908555 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63646737276 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634218289086 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.2932230427 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.076923077 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0769230769 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.9230769231 7.06120827912 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22869315094 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742499389662 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631718432626 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12154286747 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033405908751 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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