More and more prisons are being built to house
the world's criminals and many people believe
long term imprisonment is the answer to solving the crime problem.However,others feel that medical and psychological assistance is what is required.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Crime is a social vice yet societies have been dealing with this throughout the history of societies.Numerous prisons adequate the world's criminals while others believe that medical and psychological is practically valuable.This essay will aim to assess both views and contentious programs.
Some people think that releasing this type of
criminals is in a sense releasing the identified
social dangers with high old habits.In the second cases,long term imprisonment is more
effective than not having one at all,and least it
offers prisoners more options when they are realised.More importantly, long term inmates often report that they repeat offence from the above discussion and criminals as members of society who need to help to fit in.
Others believe that medical and psychological assistance should be required though longer terms would entail even greater costs.
Prisoners can be put to work in community
service project, which both provide prisoners with valuable training, public with much needed services.
In conclusion, we should restrict some limits
to prisoners conditions and give them a chance
to realise life better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1000.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 174.0 315.596192385 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74712643678 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93951893483 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.729885057471 0.561755894193 130% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 506.74238477 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 130.545011395 49.4020404114 264% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 200.0 106.682146367 187% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.8 20.7667163134 168% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.38176352705 274% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249794780409 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110466303338 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589458404651 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0675028481736 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581970000894 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.1 13.0946893788 176% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.51 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.66 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.22 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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