Day by day the list of endangered animals in the wild is grievously increasing. This essay aims to enlist the reasons for this negative trend, followed by a logical vivid solution.
One of the major struggles of wildlife are Poachers. These are the type of people who do illegal hunting and brings extinction to any species as long as their pockets will be full of money. For example, rhinoceros that can be found primarily in South Africa had been hunted down by poachers for centuries because of the luxurious value of their horn, in result, there are only few that is left in their species and was considered as one of the endangered animals in the world. Another reason for this is "Prehistoric Belief". A certain country in Europe has this unique belief that they will lure an ample quantity of wales to shore and Islanders will literally slaughter the aquatic animals in cold blood. They thought that by performing this act yearly will give bountiful life across the whole year.
These problems are severe and immediate action should be taken into account. One significant solution is to deploy more people in the wild 24/7. This ensures that a minimal percentage of illegal hunters could slip through. Another way is to engrave chipsets in all of the endangered animals, This will aid the authorities to track the animal's movement and will help identify if certain anomaly with respect to their position or behavior is in progress, this will serve as a flag whether they are in attack or not. Moreover, ancient beliefs must be eradicated. Law must be implemented and enforce strictly to prevent baseless prehistoric beliefs, the government must also take a step on educating people who do this practice, that murdering a defenseless animal will not ensure one's future.
To conclude, while wildlife extinction is a major problem across all of the countries in the world, I do believe that by securing the life of this animals, implementing the law and proper education to people will prevent these animals from the verge of extinction.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'animals'' or 'animal's'?
Suggestion: animals'; animal's
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, while, for example, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95664739884 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68634583421 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566473988439 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.6685640818 49.4020404114 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.333333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0666666667 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.93333333333 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286027308058 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906083032387 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463920887276 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181499984689 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428746261896 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.