More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?
Untamed animals are becoming on the edge of extinction at a continually increasing rate and many others are endangered species. This essay will discuss the main causes of animal extinction. Along with providing possible solutions afterward.
According to recent studies, the foremost causes of animal extinction are habitat loss as well as illegal hunting. The more the rate of deforestation increases, the more natural habitats get destroyed. This is because the bodies of some animals can't tolerate living in aberrant conditions. It is acknowledged that after a few years, the rate of destruction of natural habitats will have increased by 25%, causing more and more threats to animals. Also, overhunting is one of the most crucial causes of animal extinction. Some animals get callously and profusely hunted. This act doesn't leave time for animals to reproduce, causing extinction. Another cause of the loss of natural habitat is global warming. For illustration, global warming warming causes ice, which is a natural habitat for many animals, to melt.
Some possible solutions to this problem are protecting natural areas, forcing laws that prevent overhunting, reducing the use of greenhouse gases, and sharing awareness among people. If carried out correctly, the rate of extinction will decrease eventually. Greenhouse gases are the main reason for global warming. There are many other alternatives for the things that produce greenhouse gases such as using electric cars instead of fuel ones. This won't only save the animals, but also save human beings. Also, forcing laws will prevent these avaricious hunters from hunting down animals frequently. To end with, Many people are oblivious to this problem. Sharing awareness will save animals from extinction.
To summarise everything, Some human activities negatively affect animals. However, we can decrease the rate of extinction by enforcing the right laws and providing people with information about this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1680.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52631578947 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76725886152 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542763157895 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.3887413339 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.3636363636 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8181818182 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.40909090909 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245843989238 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071180276371 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463708218134 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146439835643 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0212197371091 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 41.36 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.2 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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