More money should be spending on citizen's welfare on or weapon. Give your opinion. Given reasons and examples for your answer.
Nowadays, scenario has been changed as compare to past that local authorities has started spending more money on citizen's welfare rather than spending on weapons. i believe that it is necessary to fulfill citizens need consequently they should spend money for welfare of citizen.
At the outset, the mindset of local councils have changed and started spending on citizen's welfare because of some reasons. The prime reason behind this is that for the growth of the country as well as for the betterment of an individuals.
so they started spending on different sectors which will help people in different ways. For instance, authorities are spending on education and health sector which are butter and bread for an individual due to which child's future will be brighter and also by spending on health the ratio of healthy people to unhealthy people will be burgeoning.
Moreover, now different nations are living peacefully ergo no need of spending more money on weapon but is they spend on public sector and proliferating the tax on products which will help in GDP of the nation. Also by spending within the nation problems can be curtailed among mankind. For example, Hitler, the king of the Germany during second world war, just spent money on weapons which result in the change in behavior of each and every person toward Hitler. Henceforth, to avoid all this kind of problems they should spend money on welfare of citizen.
To recapitulate, it is better to spend more money on welfare of citizen for support and also for brighter future of nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, if, moreover, second, so, well, as for, for example, for instance, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1301.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9846743295 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54067193324 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509578544061 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4195927779 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.272727273 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7272727273 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305850081471 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137253944937 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720708818044 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198176468014 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067127998105 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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