More people are stressed today than ever before. What are the causes of this stress? What can be done to address this problem?
In this day and age, the number of people suffering from stress has been on the rise, which is a worrisome phenomenon. This below paragraph will discuss the main causes and solutions for this trend.
To begin with, there are some reasons why more people are stressed today. First, a lot of people experience stress as a result of the strain at work. To be more specific, they are under more pressure to perform well in the workplace for promotion and other rewards. Moreover, it is reported that the poor relationships among colleagues also put workers under a lot of pressure. For example, some even experience bullying or suppression at work, which not only curb their productivity but also cause depression. Secondly, studying also underlies the prevalence of stress. Because of the more and more advanced knowledge, some of the students are struggling in vain. For instance, a student adepting at Maths, Science, etc is forced to study English, Literature, History, etc comprehensively, which are not their interest. Not only that, the pressure that stems from other peers and family expectations, etc is pushing them to the brink of breaking down. Last but not least, it is money that causes stress for some people. Interlinked with the bloom of human advancement is the money-oriented society. Without money, we cannot survive or allocate to other members of the family. For example, in a typical family with two kids, parents have to shoulder the tax, necessities and even the tuition fee. As a consequence, they are more likely to suffer from stress, depression, and so on.
Therefore, some plausible measures are needed to tackle this trend. Firstly, doing some light exercise is a good way to reduce stress. Working out regularly is one of the best ways to relax the body and mind, as well as improving the mood. Secondly, constraints can be eradicated with new hobbies. It’s people’s interests that reflect their gift, aspirations, originalities, etc so taking up new hobbies can be a way for them to revitalize and heal their own soul.
In conclusion, the tendency of suffering stress is caused by the increasing pressure from working, studying and financial burden. Hence, it is vital for people to create their own space and own ways to reinvigorate themselves after pressure from every aspect of life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 621, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...f the more and more advanced knowledge, some of the students are struggling in vain. For in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1940.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 386.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02590673575 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80358284711 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559585492228 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7530642434 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.347826087 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7826086957 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26086956522 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226013053627 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069113087322 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610716538681 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146695652996 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582933728174 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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