More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why? Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?
Recently, a trend has flourished to have babies at a later age instead in early age. This trend has different advantages, disadvantages, and reasons. Most of people want to have children after few years of their marriage because they want to focus on their career life and many other people just need to develop understanding and maturity in their couple so that they can raise their child in a better way.
The new competitive labor market is allowing less family time as in the previous eras. Many career-oriented people focus on the career and then on their family life because, with developed career life, they can give luxury and good time to their family members. Whereas in the early era’s life was so simple and parents can adjust their family with less money and now modern life children cannot escape from new comfortable lifestyle and they demand from their parents when they see these things in the hand of other children. Therefore, it is essential to have a good career to facilitate your children with a good lifestyle.
On the other hand, if they decide to have children in their later age then they will suffer from fertility issues. Moreover, no doubt they are mature and disciplined but they have less stamina to grow their children. If we analyze this issue, we will know that the world population rate is huge, so it is better for us to not have a child or to have good disciplined child.
To conclude the arguments, we will realize that this issue has some merits and demerits but merits outweigh to demerits. It is beneficial for us and the whole world to develop on a sustainable basis.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 151, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the people') or simply say ''Most people''.
Suggestion: Most of the people; Most people
...advantages, disadvantages, and reasons. Most of people want to have children after few years o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, whereas, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71024734982 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4999194633 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508833922261 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.6359463113 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.083333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5833333333 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237310033597 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902929134503 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062720261817 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148563947832 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0743350794995 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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