In recent years, there has been a proliferation of individuals divulging their personal information on the internet for a multitude of purposes. While there are some benefits to this trend, I am inclined to believe that it is a deleterious development.
On the one hand, sharing personal information online can be convenient and efficient. It allows individuals to quickly and easily conduct financial transactions or connect with others on social networks. This can save time and effort and can facilitate communication and commerce.
However, despite these benefits, there are significant risks and drawbacks associated with disseminating personal information online. One major concern is the heightened risk of identity theft and fraud. Cybercriminals can easily access this information and use it to commit crimes. This can have serious financial consequences for the victim.
Another issue is the potential loss of privacy. Once information is shared online, it can be difficult to control who has access to it and how it is used. This can lead to unwanted attention or even harassment from strangers.
Furthermore, sharing personal information online can also make individuals more vulnerable to targeted advertising and manipulation. Companies can use this information to create detailed profiles of individuals and target them with personalized ads or even political propaganda.
In conclusion, while sharing personal information online may seem convenient, it comes with significant risks and drawbacks. It is important for individuals to be cautious when sharing their personal information online and to take steps to protect their privacy and security.
- Some people believe that government should take care of old people and provide financial support after they retire Others say individual should save during their working years to fund their own retirement What is your opinion Give reasons for your answer 84
- Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 89
- Some people think teachers have a greater influence than parents in the development of a child s intelligence and social skills Do you agree or disagree 93
- Films were produced by big companies in the past but today people are able to make a film Do you think this trend is positive or negative 89
- People should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live a new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree. 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, may, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.676 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23720620289 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5609404617 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6875 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.625 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8125 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199212243653 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682383074538 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450054693538 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110360916367 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038147225566 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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