In most countries, prison is an effective solution to the problem of crime. Some people think it is a more effective solution to provide education for those who violate the law. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that to tackle the crime, governments should convict criminals with imprisonment. In contrast, some observers adopt a view that re-educating lawbreakers is more effective. From my perspective, I suppose that these two solutions are equally important.
On the one hand, for those who commit serious crimes, including murder, sexual abuse or assault, government should issue strict laws to accuse them in order to steer them away from abiding citizens. If not doing so, they could continue to harm others in the society. Furthermore, this solution could deter people who intend to violate the laws in the future. For example, judges should sentence those who are involved in sexual harassment with a harsh punishment or even life imprisonment so that they could realize that their crime is unforgivable and then after finishing their sentences, they might not recommit.
On the other hand, with petty crimes such as pick-pocketing, shoplifting and vandalism, criminals should be rehabilitated, especially teenage ones. It is indisputable that this kind of law could educate them to differentiate right from wrong and how to resist these temptations. In addition, creating some special vocational courses which aim to provide them with a certificate or a degree would be essential. Therefore, in the future they could have a good job to earn a living, which leads them to avoid breaking the laws. As a result, the criminal rate would decelerate significantly.
In conclusion, imprisonment and rehabilitation would be of paramount importance for the sake of addressing the problem of crime. Governments should take both of these solutions into consideration.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, then, therefore, for example, i suppose, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, kind of, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40839694656 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10871009161 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63358778626 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6259907076 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.214285714 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7857142857 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179685022348 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597974621561 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479675189923 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108446061805 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364207585561 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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