Teachers used to convey information, but now with wide resources of information, there is no role for teachers to play in modern education. Do you agree or disagree?
It is debated that in the context of the contemporary society, teachers no longer play a pivotal role in education like in the past because of the wide range of information. From my perspective, I wholeheartedly oppose this statement for the following justifications.
On the one hand, some people opine that there are wide resources of information for learners to gain, so they do not need teachers any more. This is because they might estimate teachers as a source of knowledge and nowadays they could absorb knowledge everywhere ranging from the Internets to books. However, this argument should be considered to be short-sighted. It is obvious that these materials of preference could be unreliable due to the fact that they are not subject to censorship. This may lead students into misunderstanding and encounter with distorted information.
On the other hand, teachers would be not only a reliable source of knowledge, but also skilled instructors who were well-trained with pedagogical skills. It is undeniable that teachers are of paramount importance in the cognitive development of a student. They provide students with materials designed by experts as well as teach students many essential skills including information sifting, fact marshalling or even researching methods. As a result, students could enhance their academic performance, which could assist them to go further in their education path. Furthermore, teachers not only educate students with their knowledge, but also by their moral life which could be a role model for students to follow. For example, my lecturer is a devoted psychotherapist who always shows an unconditional love to his patients especially to children. Therefore, I usually look up to him and try all my best to be an excellent expert like him.
In conclusion, despite the fact that nowadays students could have a mixed variety of knowledge sources, they still need teachers as their instructors, ideal models as well as a companion in their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, still, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29874213836 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14351079846 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566037735849 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7125973648 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.333333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.73333333333 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18864161062 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659063342367 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705519933111 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125502617818 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660212096729 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.