The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Some people believe that enhancing people’s lives should be considered as the most essential purpose of science. I totally agree with this viewpoint for the reasons outlined below.
As humans are the core of this world, everything revolving around them should do wonders to their lives, including science. It is humans who have discovered and developed science by many experiments and trials since they believe that it can enhance their living standards, therefore, science serves people as an obvious result. For example, the electricity or bulb invented by Thomas Edison had become one of the most incredible milestones in human history, which led people to a whole new chapter of civilization and industrial revolution. Clearly, science should benefit the ones who are not only the center of the Earth but also the ones who have kept evolving it through time.
Additionally, science without practical applications in people’s lives would be eliminated soon. Because only by being used and welcomed by people could inventions or innovations exist and be long - lasting in this world, the original purpose of science should always be satisfying humans' demands. The bankruptcy of some technological start - up companies in Tokyo, which prioritized the future life of the human race on Mars is one of the clearest examples for the elimination of science if it has nothing to do with the benefit of people. Therefore, the ultimate aim of science should be to upgrade the quality of people’s lives.
In conclusion, although the purposes of science can vary according to many viewpoints, in my opinion, its most important target should be related to people’s advantages. This might be the foundation of science and its future as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24285714286 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83039151727 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582142857143 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9142085809 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.333333333 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356480052849 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140032315471 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060924475498 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234497767856 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056479806925 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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