The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
These past few decades have witnessed an increase in the concern for the pure purpose of science. Some people claim that the first and foremost use of science is to better the living condition of human beings. From my vantage point, I totally in favor of that school of thought for the following reasons.
To begin with, I believe that since science can exist thanks to the mankind, it is a duty for science to provide its creator with priorities. In other words, human beings are the one who give birth to and develop science to the current level. As a result, it is understandable that the most noble aim of science might be to satisfy humankind's needs and ameliorate the living standards of people.
Another driving force for my statement is that by upgrading people's living state, science could also benefit from it. To be specific, it is a fact that people's demand always rise at a rapid speed as time flies. This could, therefore, lead to the phenomenon of mankind, especially scientists and developers striving to dig deeper and promote this particular field, which in turns may open up a new era in the history of humankind.
In conclusion, in my opinion, science should be used as a tool to enhance mankind's lives because firstly it is a responsibility and secondly, it is a win-win situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1084.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75438596491 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66369294027 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627192982456 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7840173267 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.4 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.6 7.06120827912 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210802397925 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775315640305 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343561587544 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115216065795 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035024359802 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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