It is commonly believed that the top feature of music is to help people to relieve pressure. I completely agree with this, and I believe that the fast-paced environment and the digital technology are the two major factors involved.
It is undeniable that we are leading a life of fast pace nowadays, which has led to great pressure on us. People from almost all walks of life handle a heavy workload every day and even students are occupied with homework and exams. I would argue that this hectic life put a severe strain on us, as we have to deal with so many issues in most cases. As a result, there is a great need for emotional release. Music is an appropriate choice to reduce stress for almost everyone. We can enjoy music in a number of simple ways such as singing.
Alongside the influence of the busy lifestyle, the development of digital technology is making music easy and convenient to spread quickly in a wide range. The existence of internet has made it possible to listen to music made by different composers and singers almost wherever and whenever you want. Besides, one can get access to wonderful music on the internet at a low cost. And there are varieties of equipment to play music including stereos, earphones, headphones and so on. We can even make some original music on our own with some useful applications conveniently and post it on the website to share with people.
In conclusion, we live in a fast-paced society under pressure but music can relieve our negative emotion with the aid of technology.
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- The most important function of music is that helps people reduce stress or relaxing To what extent do you agree or disagree 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, so, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72862453532 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64986669619 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587360594796 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.519754091 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8571428571 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142074111519 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496319126179 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044356499352 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0811392228846 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304872062957 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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