Undoubtedly in these days, the internet is flooded with various types of websites anyone can search any sort or information even though available data is either little or huge but we can get. Some people argue that more than half of the information that is provided by internet is not genuine.While I believe that internet is a big source of information to the people, on some websites the information is incorrect that deceives people.
On the one hand, I think that websites are created for benefit of people to provide useful information deeply. Firstly, the data available on the internet is utilized by majority or people for numerous purposes as if people have basic knowledge but they need deeper details then internet is a best way to get more information. What is more, the facts and figures on the internet source are updated and augmented time to time so that people could take latest information. Secondly, people have natural affinity of using internet as everyone can access internet via mobile phones and they browse internet almost whole day somehow as well as they can talk to their friends to discuss their important projects or assignment. Finally, internet information is diffused and used by students, businessmen, banks, medical practitioners and even government use internet for
Like management of traffic and control automobile pollution etcetera. Most importantly, there are a number of websites such as YouTube.com, google.com and apple.com that provides valuable information to the public.
On the other hand, as per perception of a few people information provides by the information involves half truth or sometimes completely disingenuous. First of all, taking information online is not sometimes satisfactory as website creators exaggerate information but do not tell the main point which anyone needs. Besides this, occasionally people intends to disseminate rumours among people to provoke them that gives bad results but have nothing which ruined the ambience of society. It is interesting to mention that, everyone has right to post information on the internet so obviously! Information could be unauthentic. That is why, there is no quality assurance that whole part of information on the internet is reliable or not. Last but not least, many times we fail to get updates and we use outdated information which does not provide any advantage at all.
To conclude, although I put forward the argument that some part of information on the internet is unreliable yet I believe that many websites have been providing authentic information since its creation.
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- Some people think that climate impacts business in a negative way but others believe that it provides more business opportunities Discuss both views and give your opinion 87
- Some people say that e books and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magzines to what extent do you agree or disagree 41
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- Some children find some subjects as mathematics and philosophy are too difficult to learn so some people argue that those subjects should be optional rather than compulsory To what extent do you agree or disagree 64
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, i think, such as, as well as, first of all, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 29.0 8.3376753507 348% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2187.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 415.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26987951807 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.923849901 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53734939759 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 712.8 506.74238477 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.1066384522 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.8 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6666666667 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339412952286 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125368941444 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570373489918 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192441940884 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0783930722152 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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