It is necessary for a big company to run cheap restaurant in their premises, as it helps most of the staff member to buy their lunch from there. Most of the staff members are having issue with their lunch as there spouse is also working, and they do not have enough time to prepare a lunch. The company might set up childcare facility on the upper floor of the building as it is vacant and there is no use for that place. However, this restaurant not only feed staff of the company, but also provide foods to local people, who have lower income, and cannot afford high priced food on daily basis.
Apart from this, the restaurant also provide employment to 20 people daily, while childcare home need only 4 employees to run its operation. Within 1kilometer of office premises, there are 2 big daycare facilities available, which will help the staff member to take admission of their children to take care of them, while they are on job. As per my concern, I also took admission of my child in one of them childcare home, which provides great facilities and amenities.
The company should drop the idea of childcare facility and continue the operation of restaurant, which will feed many of people daily requirements.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 149, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...feed many of people daily requirements.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1008.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 215.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68837209302 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44267981824 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586046511628 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 21.6473872557 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 126.0 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.875 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0468605214532 0.244688304435 19% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0223257950037 0.084324248473 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0233915486602 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.031807899128 0.151304729494 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00801619574836 0.056905535591 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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