most people accept that we now live in a globalized world but not everyone agrees this is beneficial. to what extent is globalization a positive or negative development
World is becoming a global village and fusion is becoming mother of these days. Some people are welcoming the change and development but, on the other hand some are opposing globalization. From my perspective they are a lot of positives than compared with negatives. In the way of globalization society will get benefits like universal business expunction and migration will be easier than before, these are the major benefits caused by the effects of globalization.
Now a days, people are interested to migrate from one place to another place for, their development. At the same time, globalization invented new way of living style for the society. This development leads to create new form of systems like capitalism and socialism etc. these are the main advantages for the great interest which was showing by the mankind. Moreover, society is getting numerous opportunities to face different culture, tradition and new forms of lives. Globalization introduced a lot of grate plot forms to the people who are interested to adopt various cultures in the world and furthermore talented people will get a chance improve their skills and introduce their abilities to the world. Not only culture and tradition but also business, from last one decade we are observing that the sectors like Information technology and manufacturing industries got profound growth all over the world due to the effects of globalization. This development leads to improve the economical strength of the countries. For instance before globalization Indian economy was 10 million but, after globalization Indian economy was running towards 10 trillion according to the statistics in the year 2019. Governments are giving great importance to global development.
Action speaks louder than words; like that globalization grabbed the greatest interests of the authorities all over the world. Ministries are giving special importance to the effects of global development and this development created a different demines in the society. Authorities are getting plethora of benefits by the global development effects. In the other word, governments are getting 30% of annual income with the acts of globalization according to the statistics of the year 2016.
These are the main positives and effects, in that the main effects are business expansion and global connectivity so, globalization is not a trouble maker of the societies in every country. but in the case of losing older tradition and culture is the main negative aspect in the whole scenario.
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Suggestion: Nowadays
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Suggestion: a day; days
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Suggestion: a lot of grates
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 28.0 8.3376753507 336% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2135.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 398.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36432160804 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02359036319 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484924623116 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 682.2 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7312525445 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.75 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.65 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28084004912 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082377524237 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466628148648 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168508180314 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405953249192 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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