People attend collage or universities for many different reasons , why do you think people attend college or universities /
Universities like this littel world , bibble of time separatr from every thing before attending college or universities for many different reasons. i think majority of people attracting towords university because career preparation , increasing their abilitys and knowledge.
Now a days , universitys and colleges are the best platforms to develop skills, through attending lybrirys, group discustion and seminars by that way student and people can develop their comunication skills. while in this way people are attracting to words universities and collages.
By thee way ,there is an another strong reason, that to build up their career with the support of university's and colleges led us to get good opportunity in feature.
Attanding to the big plotforms pf education leads us to develope our self
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...heir abilitys and knowledge. Now a days , universitys and colleges are the best p...
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... education leads us to develope our self
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 679.0 1615.20841683 42% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 123.0 315.596192385 39% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52032520325 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.33024571262 4.20363070211 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97652908127 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 176.041082164 51% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.731707317073 0.561755894193 130% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 506.74238477 42% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0543673585 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.166666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362460452598 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159418172673 0.084324248473 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0935169196928 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179632641704 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141001842113 0.056905535591 248% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 78.4519038076 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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