While people are celebrating any religious or cultural curnival, they overlook the moral lesson of this and enjoy the curnival solely. I completely agree with this point of view.
To begin with, people, especially the juvenile, enjoy festivals weather it is religious or traditional in their own way. To illustrate, when any festival is upcoming, poeple do not consider the main thing or this programme, but they arrenge this with so many music, dance. For exaple, In the Durga Puja, Hindu people enjoy this with dancing and singing song, and going here and there to watch the senarios rather than doing the puja. Furthermore, In the festival of Pohela Boishakh, people come out with their spouse, sometimes girlfriend and boyfriend and enjoy their time with their own way instead of doing respect to the Bangla. Consequently, the image of a festival is being destroyed and dimishing the cultures of thounsand of years.
However, it is also undeniable that some people originally celebrate anay festival properly. The people aged more than 60, respect their origin and the moral thing of a festival. In the Nabanna, which is the famous farmer's occasion, the old people eat with panta vath and Hilsha fish to celebrate this. As a result of this, the festival receive it's deserved respect from people.
To put in a nutshell, the carnivals are being insulted with the advancement of technology and mordanisation of it. So i think poeple should be respectfull with their festival and celebrate any occasion with it's own way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 255, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun music seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much music', 'a good deal of music'.
Suggestion: much music; a good deal of music
...rogramme, but they arrenge this with so many music, dance. For exaple, In the Durga Puja, ...
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Line 7, column 120, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... technology and mordanisation of it. So i think poeple should be respectfull with...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, look, so, while, i think, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04743083004 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63152069834 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573122529644 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2987323473 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2307692308 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292921868706 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111182413716 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398214494923 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177572379252 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634464144001 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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