Childhood does not last long time; most of young graduates immediately enter into the economically productive life, where they remain for vast of their life. Hence, job satisfaction contributes many factors to be achieved and In my opinion, it is idealistic to satisfy everyone.
In average people spent eight hours a day, five days a week at work for 35-40 years. Working environment as well as colleagues are the main factors for job satisfaction. Its them and a place, where we are the most, and having comfortable place to work and being surrounded by friendly and helpful workmates positively impact our mood. Undoubtedly our workmates become our friends, not only at work, but also after working hours. However, the most important reason is salary. In modern world having adequate pay makes life easier in many perspectives. Take, leisure activity, for example. Almost everyone has a hobby, such as gym, hiking, movies, etc., and these leisure activities are high cost. If employee does not have enough funds to support it, after he pay bills and grocery, he will be less likely satisfied at work.
Over decades, researches trying to find the best way how to fully satisfied every employee. Advocates of this, in my opinion, idealistic idea, spreading uncountable arguments to support the vision of everyone's working satisfaction. I concede that most workers are probably some how satisfied with their work as they would be leaving their current job, however, I believe, that many of them can not do that due to their financial situation and family. For instance, in lot of countries in Africa, unemployment rate is so high, that leaving job owing to being unsatisfied is nearly unrealistic. Furthermore, many young people now leaving their profession and experience different lifestyle in foreign countries. For many reasons, such as visa restrictions or recognising their education, they are not allowed to continue in the carrier they were used to in their home country. The prime example is Australia, where many highly qualified individuals have to work in hospitality, construction or cleaning. Hence, I believe, that vast of them are not satisfied.
In short, job satisfaction is the most important part of our life, as we spend most of our lives at working environment, surrounded with workmates. On the one hand, I believe that great number of employees are satisfied with their job, however, on the other hand, idea of every workers satisfaction seems unrealistic.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 252, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...orking satisfaction. I concede that most workers are probably some how satisfied ...
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Line 5, column 275, Rule ID: SOME_HOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'somehow'?
Suggestion: somehow
...concede that most workers are probably some how satisfied with their work as they would...
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Line 7, column 279, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'workers'' or 'worker's'?
Suggestion: workers'; worker's
...wever, on the other hand, idea of every workers satisfaction seems unrealistic.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, well, for example, for instance, in fact, in short, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2087.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 403.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17866004963 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86203306139 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573200992556 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 648.0 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8728109327 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.380952381 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1904761905 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31920822921 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850455414742 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0809266119158 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211180772492 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687889883655 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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