Nowadays, people want to earn more and more money because of competitive era, they do one job for a long time owing to satisfaction. So, they tend to spend long hours of their jobs. While, I believe that are so many elements, which are extremely helpful for job's satisfaction. They feel comfortable at their work places due to various things. Therefore, I will discuss my view points in up coming paragraphs.
To begin with, there are various reasons which effect to satisfaction of employers. First and foremost is that relationship with other workers is extremely beneficial for staying at one place for a long time. In another words, when someone do job in any bussiness, so he or she has to communication with other employers. Therefore, if person do not make stronger relation with other masses, then they will not stay at this place for a long time. Moreover, money is second importany factor for workers because, nowadays everyone joins a job to earn more money to fulfill their dreams. Dint of, modern era, people want to achieve all of the luxurious things around the world to lead a wealthy as well as healthu lifestyle. So, if they earn appropriate salary from from their boss, they will feel comfortable in their bussiness, and they can do all work with full concertations.
Furthermore, environment also beneficial factor for doing stable job. In another words, if people achieve everything from their bussiness, they will do their job in proper way because worker always want friendly enviroment that's why they easily share their problem with campany's manager and other emplyers sans any hesitation. Which is extremely helpful for company's growth because, when workers face any kind of problem, then they will solve it. As a result, they choose better solution of problem.
To conclude, it is lucid from above mentioned information that satisfaction of job relies on different factors. Which play a vital for doing one job for a long time. I think that when workers have all the facilities from their current place, then they will satisfy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 241, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
...ng time. In another words, when someone do job in any bussiness, so he or she has ...
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Line 3, column 629, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... of, modern era, people want to achieve all of the luxurious things around the world to le...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: from
...le. So, if they earn appropriate salary from from their boss, they will feel comfortable ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
... worker always want friendly enviroment thats why they easily share their problem wit...
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Line 5, column 473, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
...will solve it. As a result, they choose better solution of problem. To conclude, it...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, well, while, as to, i think, kind of, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1718.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97971014493 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66700375941 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530434782609 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4247034052 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4210526316 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1578947368 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63157894737 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226468745063 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802910607346 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449119639665 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165540396808 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314253583649 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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