It is irrefutable to say that nation's economy plays a vital role in country's growth. While other people say that there are many factors which are extremely helpful in the way of success. Therefore, i will discuss my view points regarding this statement in up coming parapraphs.
To begin with, it is true that economy is also beneficial part of nation's progress because if any nation does not have strong economy status, then this nation will not provide appropriate facilities to their citizens. In another words, poor country always has less opportunities for progressing dint of low economy status.
On the other side, I believe that other factors also immensely helpful to fulfill nation's dream. Firstly, education and other basic amenities are basic need for inhabitants to live healthy lifestyle because if students get appropriate facilities of study, then they will get lucrative job opportunities in their future which is extremely helpful for their personal growth because if they have enough money to fulfill their dreams, then they lead a happy lives. Moreover, infrastruture is pericious properity of nations. Economy will increases due to bulidings and perservation of historical architectures. If any nation has beautiful and attractive infrastruture, then tourism will attract which enhance the economy level of country.
To sum up, it is clear that economy is extremely important for nation's success along with other factors. I believe that above mentioned other measures also important for country's progress.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 31, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
It is irrefutable to say that nations economy plays a vital role in countrys ...
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Line 1, column 86, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... plays a vital role in countrys growth. While other people say that there are many fa...
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Line 1, column 199, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...lpful in the way of success. Therefore, i will discuss my view points regarding t...
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Line 3, column 119, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ress because if any nation does not have strong economy status, then this nation ...
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Line 3, column 262, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun opportunities is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... another words, poor country always has less opportunities for progressing dint of l...
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Line 5, column 455, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'life'?
Suggestion: life
...ll their dreams, then they lead a happy lives. Moreover, infrastruture is pericious p...
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Line 5, column 534, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'increase'
Suggestion: increase
...ious properity of nations. Economy will increases due to bulidings and perservation of hi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, therefore, while, it is true, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42677824268 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81961805376 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581589958159 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.7985750012 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.083333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9166666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167312545778 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812428668779 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0979155346184 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126781381254 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0762614118051 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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