It is irrefutable to say that people are getting busy in their hactic schedules because of this, masses do not give proper time to their families which leads various detrimental problems in their lives. Therefore, this statement has both pros and cons, and I will discuss my view points in up coming paragraphs.
To commence with, I believe that there are many disadvantages of increasing gap between inhabitants and families but first and foremost is that individuals become selfish due to modern world. In another words, these days, everyone wants to earn more and more money because they want to achieve every comfort of life therefore, they spend long working hours on their jobs, and forget about their family memebers. As a result, they give more importance to professional life as against to personal life which give birth to conflicts between them. Secondly, if a person works far from their other memebers of family, then their family cannot spare their problems with him, sometimes, this gap distance of one family memeber convert into divorce.
On the flip side, there is one advantage of this trend that employers give accurate intenion towards their work, if they live far from their family. Thus, they will earn chunks of money. Which is extremely beneficial to fulfill their family's dreams. Apart from this, if workers livr alone, then they easily manage their expenses.
To sum up, although this trend has a advantage but, I deem that this trend leads to numerious personal problems among people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, apart from, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1271.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06374501992 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41668853723 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625498007968 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4765263352 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.545454545 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8181818182 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63636363636 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195238868293 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830559167857 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724810004449 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156990285751 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674741456542 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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