Most societies have their homeless people. Some people think that the best way to help them is to give them money. To what extent do you agree ?
Recent decades have seen a remarkable increase in the homelessness proportions worldwide, raising many questions of societal sustainability. Although the proposal of pecuniary assistance sounds reasonable, there are many more practical measures to tackle this problem.
There are many disadvantages associated when it comes to supplying homeless people with money. First, government disbursements to homeless citizens would lead them to undermining the value of making a honest living by their working capacity. This will discourage them from finding a good job, worsening their living standards. Second, financial assistance to homeless individuals could mislead other citizens with better living conditions to the assumption that homelessness is the easiest way to make money. This, there by, can reduce their dedication to work as well as motivations to climb the socio-economic ladders and incentivise their intention of living a homeless life.
Additionally, official authorities should undertake some more effective measures to minimising this social issue. First, the government should allow free access to educational institutions with vocational training for the homeless ones. Plenty of evidence suggested that these places will equip them with basic and practical working skills, promoting career prospects. In addition, The government should send the homeless people to some modern nations with the shortage of workforce. In fact this will not only benefits the homeless people with a higher remuneration but also increases the general working productivity in the host countries.
In conclusion, I believe that monetary aid is not a practical approach to homelessness. Many progessive initiatives such as free educational access and exported labour would benefits them more.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.91538461538 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08408781216 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611538461538 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.63715654 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 109.857142857 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1874035432 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644501512919 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038190064839 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0964529262291 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598875340752 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.06 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.