One of the most noticeable trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that in number of society, the contribution of mother and father differs. There is a wide range of factors that accounts for this soaring concerns. The partial role of parents must be equal in future. This essay will further elaborate above-mentioned.
To commence with, there is a deluges of reasons of role of parents in children development. The most preponderant one is that lack of resources. To elaborate it, it is generally believe that males are the ones who work for family to earn money and females cook food or do household chores. In most vicinity males have to work for their children for their bright future and pay bills. It cannot only contribute to variation in parenting role, but also leads to numerous other catastrophic in various fields. For instance, the study results published by the government of Australia between March 2014 and April 2016 clearly indicates that lack of resources is the biggest cause that effect the tole of mother and father. Needless to say all these demerits have far-reaching impacts on society.
However, in upcoming time the role of parents will be equal. This is because technology is booming in every sphere of life. Before the invention of the technology. In order to full fill the needs of the family fathers had to work outside of the house and at the same time females cook food at home. Males spend their majority of time outside from the house. As a result children spend their most time with their mothers. But nowadays, thanks to the wide range of advantages technology offers parents can enhance the quality of their lives with much ease, efficacy and convenience their chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned. For example in modern era and in future there are some multimillionaire company that offers freelancing job opportunity. With the help of that parents will give equal contribution their role in future.
To conclude, having pondered over above stated it is crystal clear that in order to full-fill daily needs males use to go work. In future this problem will be replaced with the help of technology. The role of parents will be equal.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, for example, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 41.998997996 169% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1851.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89682539683 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65630730111 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521164021164 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 594.0 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.3062637815 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4782608696 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4347826087 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.86956521739 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 3.4128256513 381% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248211664673 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081656733628 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861113918685 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170289082062 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320035900802 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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