In most successful organizations, some people believe that communications between managers and workers are important, other people said that other factors are more important. What is your opinion?

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In most successful organizations, some people believe that communications between managers and workers are important, other people said that other factors are more important. What is your opinion?

Effective managerial level interaction with employees is of belief to accomplish superior performance in most thriving organizations. Although these historically confirmed advantages, there are other considerable additional factors can contribute to one company’s successfulness.
In the real sense, frequent communication develops a sustainable relationship between the staffs and their manager, therefore creating a stable attachment amongst organizational vision and workers’ goals. Simultaneously, effective interaction ensures that the employers could address basic employees’ work-life quality and completely draw out the full potential of their staffs who possess better skills and capabilities. From bottom-up perspective, workers not only get better compensation but also feel more obligated to stay and contribute to the greater good of an healthy operation.
However, other substances are significantly consideration-worthy in order to build up more competitive advantages to acquire and retain more and greater employees. In particular, adequate compensation and benefit guarantee standard needs and maintain the delicate work-life balance, along with annual vacations and maternity leaves. Another critical criterion is professional training and recurrent expert conferences in favour to provide the staffs sufficient access to advance technology and specialized knowledge.
Chief amongst those cited elements which are completely logically equitable, I believe the most important factor to establish a healthy operation is to have a sensible leadership and a recruit staff members who are suitable for the company guideline.
In conclusion, internal communication between different levels of an operation is an indispensable element that may lead to business success. Although the lack of any other factor could also deprive the company reputation and bring back many unfavourable problems.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 576, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, in conclusion, in particular

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.34351145038 5.12529762239 124% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.47857997145 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68320610687 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.60771543086 124% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6245040603 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.090909091 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8181818182 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.54545454545 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152759082754 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519157209351 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346863295094 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0789112705419 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252621223339 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.3 13.0946893788 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 14.29 50.2224549098 28% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.79 12.4159519038 159% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.53 8.58950901804 134% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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