Some people think that money is one of the most essential factors in promoting happiness.
Do you think people can be happy without much money? What other factors contribute towards happiness.
In my opinion, prosperity definitely one of the most important elements that help building up contentment and inner peace. Without excessive money, people can still live happily, but if their incomes cannot meet the basic requirement of life, hardly could them live in comfort. A more vital living can also be made up by other factors.
I do not have a penchant to encourage others to burn out themselves for richness, though I think people should really be able to afford their most essential necessities and striving for those. Happiness with me, personally, is when you are satisfied with your accomplishments, not when you are letting your business go without any control. Happiness is not just relaxation or satisfaction, it also about hard-working and the achievement that you have gained through your actual effort. Chief amongst that, money is the most popular indicator of your successfulness.
Albeit its multi-beneficial usage, money could never substitute even the doppelganger adaptation of love-the unique expression of living creature. While money may bring up more opportunities to enjoy pleasurement, only a few people choose to enjoy their fortune by their own. Instead, contribute for your nearby society by doing charity worrks such as raising subscriptions and being surrounded by a loving and caring community especial your family, can extend the boundaries of happiness and moreover, erase barriers between different social class.
In conclusion, your behavior as a human being is the main factor to define if you are happy or not. Material wealth is one of the crucial elements to proof your talents, but loving and sharing may be considered more as the fundamental base of happiness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, really, so, still, while, i think, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29304029304 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98535023259 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648351648352 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9131888621 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.416666667 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290955604136 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089545527401 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038702737936 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154849449043 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250795681135 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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