With the arrival of the economical recession, universities’ fee rose dramatically in a number of western countries. There is even a taught putting a further pressure on higher degree awarded students to pay the total cost of their study, since they earn relatively higher during work compared to schools graduated employee. In my opinion, it is better to look at the benefits of higher education in a wider scale rather than an individual.
The fact is that scientists serve for a nation interests. If they develop a plan for construction of infrastructures in the country, the real and long terms benefits of the work go to the public. Take civil engineers with higher salary as an example who design roads for the country. They often try to design a cost-effective project which not only shorten the existing distance, but also do quality work and improve a country image that will save public budget in long-term. Given that these are the highly educated people who often develop a country economy, generate job opportunities and make people’s lives easier through innovation in technologies.
Moreover, it is extremely important to cultivate the culture of appreciation of highly educated workers, so human rights are preserved. Several constitutions in civil societies nowadays guarantee people’s basic rights for their citizens, which includes the right of education. Virtually, there are a common practices that some people are more responsible towards others and always try to effectively use their time, while others live like parasites. It is not fair to ignore people efforts, since this leads societies toward inequality which is often known the source of conflicts in the countries.
It is therefore suggested to be grateful for those who graduate from degree course rather than penalize them for their contribution to the humanity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 25, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
With the arrival of the economical recession, universities’ fee rose drama...
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Line 4, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggested being'.
Suggestion: suggested being
...icts in the countries. It is therefore suggested to be grateful for those who graduate from de...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28040540541 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9414308786 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621621621622 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9155914133 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.230769231 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205688983825 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598743352859 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386111214659 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108646976953 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03281282146 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.