Most of the urgent problems can only be solved with international cooperation. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
In this day and age, with the advent of modern technology and society. There have become increasingly serious issues within a nation or mutual-nations. Therefore, it has been debatable that to deal with urgent troubles, the only method is to use international collaboration. From my point of view, I partly with this statement, I also firmly believe that there are some problems we can consider using other measures to solve rather than just international cooperation.
On the one hand, there are some severe problems which a nation should collaborate with other countries to tackle instead of deciding by themselves. One evident strength is that there are more and more issues related to territorial disputes between a country with its neighborhood nations. It, therefore, extremely is of paramount importance to join hands with international cooperation to address so as to steer clear of unnecessary wars. For instance, recently, the battle between Israel and Palestine has been becoming significantly escalating and a considerable bearing on citizens in both nations. Thanks to having foreign collaboration from America with Russia, the conflict is being reduced to a certain extent.
On the other hand, a country also takes the responsibility for figuring out effective solutions to solve its concerns in lien of over reliance on international collaboration. From that, they can gain confidence in overcoming difficulties they encounter and foster that nation’s progress. Take Vietnam as a good example, In 1945, Vietnam went through heavy economic upheaval. Thanks to the constant efforts of governments and residences, Vietnam finally surmounted. As a result, no matter what any problems happened in terms of finance, economy, or agriculture, Vietnam can also find some suitable methods to cope and lead a stable and developing country.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that although it is of the utmost importance for a nation to ask for help from international cooperation to solve some global matters, there are some challenges or difficulties that should be handled by solely that nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 398, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, so, therefore, as to, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1783.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43597560976 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15198344352 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582317073171 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7175076903 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.866666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8666666667 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209785543527 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614454702754 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516242299166 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122079455377 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398368532305 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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