The movement of people from agricultural areas to cities to work can cause serious problems in both places. What are the serious problems? What measures can be used to solve these problems?
It is not uncommon to see residents migrate from rural areas to metropolitan cities to seek job opportunities. While this phenomenon may cause several problems in both cities and suburban areas, I believe there are approaches that can be implemented to tackle these issues.
The problems associated with the rural-to- urban shift are obvious and worth mentioning for both parts. In the first place, the increasing number of population creates overcrowding in cities. Residents would suffer from high volumes of traffic and long lines of waiting for various services. Also, more talents pouring into cities means more competition for locals, consequently creating an anxious environment in the city. Truly, It is easy to find hundreds of graduates fighting for one spot in a big company. Even the employed people are also in a state of constant anxiety, worrying that they would not be able to keep their positions and be replaced one day. What’s more, more residents also means more household waste and pollution in cities.
In the case of the countryside, with less talents working in the suburb, their economy slackens. citizens end up earning lower salaries than those in the cities. Also, this phenomenon creates a gap between rich and poor, which might lead to social insecurities in the countryside. For those young minds who stay in their hometown, they might find it difficult to be employed as less job opportunities are there. Feeling demotivated, citizens may blame local authorities for having such situation, and some of them may even commit crimes as their revenge to the government.
There is almost certainly not one solution to this problem given the complexity of the causes. However, one option could be to relocate some companies and factories to rural areas, therefore creating more job opportunities there. In this way, young minds are encouraged to stay in the countryside. Secondly, suburb authorities can offer better incentives to attract young graduates to work there. Once they established their family and communities, there is a high chance that they would settle down and contribute positively to the rural areas.
To conclude, the migration of residents moving from agricultural areas to cities brings drawbacks to both cities and rural areas. However, efforts associated with providing ample opportunities and encouraging more young people to work in suburban areas would help alleviate the problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, as to, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2074.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34536082474 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82272272415 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538659793814 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 640.8 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.3857756325 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.7619047619 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4761904762 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47619047619 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17990669274 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493280474385 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607983329524 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116115167992 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0773914271999 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.