some parents think that childcare centers provide the best services for children of pre-school age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids. discuss both view and give opinion.
Parents have different views about the best carer for their children before school. While some parents rely on family relatives, I am on board with those who vote for early-childhood organizations.
Parents supporting family members to take care of children before schools may argue that relatives can give their full attention to children. In early-child education centers, it is often the case that one staff need to be responsible for several toddlers, so staffs might be too busy with some kids, leaving others receiving less care or having their needs unmet. By contrast, family members like grandparents, more often than not, only have one baby to take care at one time, which means they can respond properly and immediately to baby’s needs, therefore providing babies with the best support. For example, they can cook meals and sing nursery rhymes based on child’s interests. However, I disagree with this opinion because most family members simply draw on their life experiences rather than professional training to take care of babies, and grandparents tend to be more lenient and permissive when it comes to their grandchild, so we might end up having children who are spoilt and under-disciplined in the long-term.
Conversely, I agree with those parents who advocate for early childhood centers, as staff members there are well-trained and can provide more professional services. To be early child teachers, people are required to acquire various knowledges including psychology and education, and receive relevant qualifications. Not only should teachers provide well-rounded physical care, but also utilize various equipments to cultivate children’s cognitive abilities as well as interests. For example, in Montessori childcare centers, faculties use instruments like guitar, violin, or drums to foster musical sense, and do interactive activities like playing sandboxes to develop children’s language skills and creativity. As a result, children are better equipped for their study at school after being cared in professional centers.
To conclude, even though children can receive one-on-one treatments at home, I believe childcare institutions can provide more professional services for the sake of children’s brain development.
- creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas. 78
- Today there are more images of disasters and violence in the media What are the causes and what are your solutions 73
- Some countries achieve international success by building specialized facilities to train top athletes instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think it is a positive or negative development？ 56
- It is becoming increasingly popular for people to travel to tourist destinations during public holidays What problems does this cause What solutions are there to these problems 84
- Earlier technological developments brought more benefits and changed the lives of ordinary people more than recent developments ever will To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, for example, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1927.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65102639296 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02730782508 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627565982405 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.2342656472 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.230769231 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2307692308 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290081530859 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116301633812 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077474994056 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193841967182 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651046055173 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.79 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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