movie have diffrent purpose some are just for entertaintment mean to asume the audience while other movies are serious and try to make audience think about something what are the contribution of both these type
movie are showes reality of our socitey and some kind of fact of real life.they are imagenation and dream of people . Both are own contribution which will be discussion up coming paragraph
entertaint movie has own diffrent pleasure. they can be a refresh mind. this type of movie is design for all class of socitey children adults poor and rich. this type of movie we can enjoy with familly. they forget worrey while watching that movie. like phir heara pheri movie is tottaly fun movie . in this movie paresh rawal has funny charechtor . also golmal movie is enjoyable fun movie
serious movie play its own role some type of motivation movie get us motivated . they effect on our social life this kind of movie realating to fact on life . they makes us emonational . like baghban movie they show emonationly relation between parents and their chaild
in industey some movie have not only social message but also have great deal of entertaintment. for example pk movies and 3 ideots
to conclude both movies have pwnrespectives audience and own contribution .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 896.0 1615.20841683 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 178.0 315.596192385 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03370786517 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58040036304 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629213483146 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 506.74238477 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.7700359154 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.9230769231 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6923076923 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53846153846 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 5.01903807615 657% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323014197267 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116100211716 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807182329812 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199448873343 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664934820117 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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