It is widely believed that music has become an indispensable sector contributing to enriching cultural diversity. As a member of society, I strongly agree with this viewpoint because of various enormous values music has brought to humankind.
Culture will not be culture without the existence of music. First and foremost, thanks to the ability of wonderful conveying contents and meaning, music can act as a guide tour in terms of culture to stimulate people's curiosity to exploit and explore deeper aspects of knowledge. As a matter of fact, listeners are easily attracted by a rhythm or a lyric of random songs. After immersing themselves in those songs, people are able to find the haven of peace and tranquility. Furthermore, music can have a magical power to change people's behaviors and attitude. Take anthem as an eminent example. Country's anthem is not only special by the unique beauty, the symbol of each country, but also by the strong and meaningful letter, which recalls all citizens about the magnificent history of their countries as well as urges people to endeavor with the aim of protecting boundaries and boosting economic development.
Another reason explaining for the importance of music is that the long-term foundation and development process of music. It is common knowledge that the appearance of music is closely associated with the co-existence of human culture. Therefore, through recording historical events and social advances and then particularly reflecting via songs, music, a useful source of culture, contributes to preserving multi-culture all over the world. For instance, in Vietnamese ethnic minorities, music is an effective tool to maintain their unpopular languages and their traditional songs are also regarded as intangible heritages by UNESCO.
In conclusion, I always assert that music plays a vital role in human culture due to its valuable values
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35451505017 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94574983438 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635451505017 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.5536048522 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.357142857 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232832777704 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785921961087 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054119805435 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150959669103 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372455979025 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.65 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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