In my countries, teenagers are encouraged to do part time jobs. What's the situation like in out country? What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of doing part time job?
Motivating teenagers to work at part time jobs is often cited in quite a number of nations. Although, same cannot be said for all the people and youth of my country. In this essay, I will emphasize on situation in my country and the pros and cons of it.
As for the current situation in my country related to part time jobs, it is more a matter of personal choice than being something toward which youth is encouraged. Here, most of the teenagers who work part time either belong to impoverish families or want to experience new things in their life. A common example of this is a boy or a girl who lives in poor family and often work to pay his/her education fees along with any needs that is not affordable by parents. In addition, working part time is not an obligation rather it is a matter of choice, hence, there is not much motivation given to youth to work during their school or leisure time.
Moving on to negative's and positive's of the part time work, there are quite a number of them. Some merits that are commonly associated with it are that one get the chance to improve communication skills, socialize with other, gain experience in the field and learn etiquettes of talking with with clients, time management, value of money and etcetera. For instance, a boy working at McDonald's often need to greet many customers along with interacting with them to take orders and offer a respectable service which immensely boost his skills of confidence and communication. On contrary, demerits often linked with the part time job are that it puts burden on mind of the youth as they have to focus both on their studies and work simultaneously. As for the example, Japan stands out most as students can be oftenly seen with workload of studies and jobs that they are doing in leisure time.
To encapsulate, working in free time is certainly beneficial, however, it comes with its own harms and rather than enforcing it as a mandatory thing on the youth, it should be left up to them to decide what they want to be or not.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, as for, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57534246575 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56562725959 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531506849315 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.5066891364 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.461538462 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0769230769 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224383208494 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908016693668 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602507101543 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134704098718 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434493684089 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 11.3001002004 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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