In my parts of the world children and teenagers are committing more crime
-why is it happening? how should children or teachers be punished?
In this contemporary world, there are several rules and laws against crime even though the crime rate continuously increases which are done by children and juvenile. there are many reasons for this situation as due to family and online influence, there are several possible solutions to control this situation.
To commence with, in this world there are several parts where children and teenagers do more crime for this there are two main reasons are here first, due to family this is because in this contemporary world each family member busy with their work and therefore they do not give enough time to children upbringing. essay on aware about their children there is possible that children learn some criminal activity because children have not sensed of good and bad try to do whatever is there watch in TV and there are several TV shows which are related to crime. Moreover, another reason is the online influence this is because immature in ages use social media and this leading to more chance of meeting evil peers. This person may teach some bad thing to children.
In addition to this, there are several possible solutions to this situation. firstly, keep a track of what children are doing this way a parent can give punishment and teacher good thing to their children if any bad thing they observe in their child. For example, if parents observed that their children to a crime they give management and ask a child from where you learn this. Furthermore, second possible sheet solution is set a limit for the use of internet no doubt that internet provides a good way to learn but there are also some things which lead to more crime so or so children while the use internet and set a limit for the use of this.
To recapitulate, there are several reasons and villain are committing a crime but, some solution is here like keep a track of what the child is doing and aa on internet use.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75903614458 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39634889454 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448795180723 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 144.79700563 49.4020404114 293% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 175.555555556 106.682146367 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.8888888889 20.7667163134 178% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.6666666667 7.06120827912 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214682004177 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0990245538362 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633638746996 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140860189518 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398706685393 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.0946893788 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.4 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.92 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.