In recent years, natural resources are being gobbled up faster than the Earth can regenerate them including oil, plants, and water. In my opinion, this overconsumption may lead to several severe consequences but people still have some possible solutions to tackle the issue.
The most glaring effect of using natural resources too much it that the resources will be gradually depleted, while the alternative energy sources are still ineffective or controversial, for example, to replace energy sources such as oil, fossil fuels, etc. The scientists have developed other energies such as electricity and nuclear, however, the cost of electric power is quite expensive and nuclear energy contains many risks when nuclear leakage incidents like in Ukraine in 1986 and in Japan in 2011. Another impact that our planet will face a high risk of air pollution because of the burning oils, furthermore, The forest will be deforestation, and animals and plants might be facing extinction. Besides, when trees are cut down, the soil will be eroded and the farmer may do not have fertile soil for agricultural fields that may threaten global food security.
Although the overuse of resources is an emergency problem, there are a number of viable solutions to tackle this issue. Firstly, scientists must find effective energy to replace fuel oil such as solar, wind - electricity, hydrogen-electricity, etc. Then applicate widely in real life. Secondly, people should economize on freshwater and recycle freshwater by the development of technology, moreover, we can convert to soft water from the seawater. Thirdly, the government must launch the strict law to protect the forest and encourage citizens to plant more trees.
In conclusion, although there are several bad effects, nations and individuals can apply various solutions to deal with this issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, third, thirdly, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37586206897 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90415622119 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655172413793 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7891281586 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.916666667 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.9166666667 7.06120827912 211% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18434450702 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589327326266 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505306777628 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959634466811 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486298217483 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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